I loved this; you write a very good convincing Molly (aside from a couple of little things that didn't sound very British like the "comforter"). I very much liked their dynamic in this story. It occurs to me whenever I think about post-Reichenbach that Sherlock puts Molly in a horrible situation. He lied to his friends and then buggered out of their lives - but she has to keep on lying to them. That's quite a burden.

Anyway, a great little story!