OMG, Trevelyan’s obsession with all the little gadgets is so adorable (“I want to see someone get zapped with it,” LOL)! I really like how well the brothers’ relationships (especially Mycroft’s with Sherlock) comes out here (“Of course Sherlock couldn'task if Mycroft was all right. He couldn't show that he was concerned”), but Sherlock’s wonderful with Q (telling him to get out of the chair by snapping, oh, Sherlock).

Thanks for putting everybody’s ages down for each section, too; I found that very helpful. (And poor Holmes brothers, none of them have spleens anymore!)

Really enjoyed this story—I’m amazed at how well they all fit together.