I am quite fond of Eldest Brother Mycroft, I have to admit. Especially when he's young and more relaxed and fun. Grown-up Mycroft is a little too anal to be fun to write. I think his response to Father dying suddenly was to attempt to control everything, all the things, so that nothing bad would happen to anyone else.

I am a bit sad I killed Father off, now. I've grown to like him. It would be interesting to see how he'd interact with his grown-up children. Can you AU an AU?

Anyway, I'm glad you liked the story! This verse is way too much fun.