ext_24142 ([identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] awanderingbard 2014-01-23 05:38 pm (UTC)

This was great. It really bothered me how little time and attention was spent on John learning what truly happened and the reasoning behind it and him dealing with the new information, you've fitted this in nicely.
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