http://shadowfireflame.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] shadowfireflame.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] awanderingbard 2014-05-12 06:25 pm (UTC)

Yay for your word fairy! I appreciate the hard work!

“Brilliant!” Molly said. “Molto grazie.”

“You're welcome,” the woman said, politely.


LOL!

“I will never use wow in that context,” Alec said. “I will only use it for 'wow, you look hot'. You look hot.”

Perfect answer—what a good husband! He even cooks and everything. :) I always sympathize with Alec when he can’t figure out directions and gets lost—I do that, too!

Alec's was identifiable as a pot, Molly's was not...

I giggled so hard at this line.

I’m pleased to see Alec starting to stand up to Sherlock just a bit more (explaining things in his teacher voice, haha). It’s really cute! Also, you really understand cats well: Toby’s treatment of Molly and Alec when they return was spot-on. And comparing Toby to Sherlock was perfect!

Lovely story. I'm glad to know their honeymoon went well! :)

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