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frozen_delight ([personal profile] frozen_delight) wrote in [personal profile] awanderingbard 2014-05-25 11:29 am (UTC)

Ooooh, the ladybird necklace!
*claps hands in wild applause*

I enjoyed this tremendously. Your Sherlock POV is absolutely marvellous, just the right mixture of not interested in normal people and their petty little problems and a genuinely good friend. Once again, you've succeeded at giving real Sherlock/Molly feelings by making their interactions cute and bizarre, but never overly sweet. Also, kudos for the way you had Sherlock solve the case, even if it was just a boring little crime to him - the idea of him frequently washing his hands in order to get the combinations to the employees' lockers particularly delighted me.

My personal highlights:

Cat-lover, had sex last night (she seemed to have sex every night, which must be exhausting), took the bus to work, just finished removing a brain.
This is such a perfect chain of deductions. It starts out with sex and ends with removing a brain. Only Sherlock would be capable of that.

Molly looked crestfallen. Which for some reason, made Sherlock angry. And not at her.
Just awww.

“You're mental,” Pearson said.
“I'm a genius,” Sherlock corrected. “Don't worry, it's a common mistake.”

Please, can I hire you to write the next Sherlock season? Pretty please? That would be so awesome. You write the best Sherlock. :)

Thank you so, so much for exploring this lovely idea and turning it into such a gorgeous little story. *hugs*

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