ext_24142 ([identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] awanderingbard 2014-06-02 07:59 pm (UTC)

Honestly, I think you could just cut out that sentence, if there is a memorial fund, it's implied that the fund gives out money for people to use in various ways. Maybe expand on the "their families can use it" to say which families- families of fallen/wounded agents or whatever.

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