ext_24232 ([identity profile] awanderingbard.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] awanderingbard 2014-06-29 07:49 pm (UTC)

SUCH a good point!

Thank you! It's something I've noticed as I tend to start with one POV and switch to another, sometimes within the fic or sometimes because one POV isn't working. I originally had Sherlock telling the story of looking after Abby when Mycroft comes to visit, and, because Sherlock wanted to seem in control and everything Abby was doing was proving he was not in control, she seemed like a total brat. When I switched to Mycroft's POV, she was mostly doing the same things, but Mycroft was like 'ah, I recognize and am comfortable with this behaviour', so she seemed like a normal kid. And that's why I like multiple POVs so much. :-P



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