I adore this fic! As it often is with your Sherlock, I like your Tony Stark way better than the actual Tony Stark I see in the films. Not that RDJ is a bad actor or anything but I find your Tony way more charming even as he's being a pest.
“J.A.R.V.I.S, call 911,” he said. “Yes, sir,” J.A.R.V.I.S said. “WHAT?!” Pepper yelled. “J.A.R.V.I.S, do not call 911!” “Yes, ma’am,” J.A.R.V.I.S said. “No, you don't take her orders over mine, call 911,” Tony insisted. “Yes, sir,” J.A.R.V.I.S said. “J.A.R.V.I.S, do NOT call 911,” Pepper said. “Yes, ma'am,” J.A.R.V.I.S said.
I legit LOL'd at this exchange. I could hear it so perfectly done with Paul Bettany's soothing and prompt tone of voice going back and forth.
I also loved the details of Tony building things when having to wait and the entire conversation between him and Pepper about anchovies. Faces!
no subject
“J.A.R.V.I.S, call 911,” he said.
“Yes, sir,” J.A.R.V.I.S said.
“WHAT?!” Pepper yelled. “J.A.R.V.I.S, do not call 911!”
“Yes, ma’am,” J.A.R.V.I.S said.
“No, you don't take her orders over mine, call 911,” Tony insisted.
“Yes, sir,” J.A.R.V.I.S said.
“J.A.R.V.I.S, do NOT call 911,” Pepper said.
“Yes, ma'am,” J.A.R.V.I.S said.
I legit LOL'd at this exchange. I could hear it so perfectly done with Paul Bettany's soothing and prompt tone of voice going back and forth.
I also loved the details of Tony building things when having to wait and the entire conversation between him and Pepper about anchovies. Faces!
Awesome job!