ext_24232 ([identity profile] awanderingbard.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] awanderingbard 2015-07-09 03:48 am (UTC)

I'm loving the dialogue here, and it's nice to see Maria getting to know Jarvis a little.

That was one of the goals of my story, was getting Maria used to Jarvis, and learning that he's not as much of a weird person to have around.

Yes, I like Jarvis a whole lot better than I like Stark.

As do I. Though I do, obviously, enjoy exploring Howard as a character.

BTW, I'm not sure how far you've read in, but chapter four had some coding issues I only just noticed, so that's fixed now.

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