ext_57962 ([identity profile] offbalance.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] awanderingbard 2007-08-15 05:47 pm (UTC)

I very much enjoyed this. It's cute without being cutesy. I love the idea of Harry playing hockey with his staff, the banter about Murphy in "girl skates" and how the whole thing built up palpable tension. Nicely done!

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