I actually think the line fit in quite nicely with the test of the fic. I just also felt like there could be more said about it, too. It's a good line; I'm glad it survived the draft-making process. :D
I wonder sometimes what kind of personality Sherlock is going to fall into during the three years away from John. Perhaps that musing inspired my thought process a bit.
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Date: 2012-10-08 09:50 pm (UTC)I wonder sometimes what kind of personality Sherlock is going to fall into during the three years away from John. Perhaps that musing inspired my thought process a bit.