Date: 2012-10-28 01:54 pm (UTC)
Christ, that snippet made me tear up at the end.

Personally as a reader, I was fine with how you're showing Sherlock's inability to speak properly. More than fine actually. It actually flows quite well and I don't envision I'd have a problem reading long segments of it as is.

Hope that helps.

And oh yeah, SQUEE LONG SHERLOCK FIC FROM YOU!!
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