It is a lovely story. It was nice to see a different perspective on the immediate aftermath of the Fall, and though I'd read other stories where Sherlock stayed with Molly, this was probably the most "sensible" one if that makes sense? :)
To be fair, the comforter jumped out particularly because I had the reverse problem in my current Sherlock-House crossover, which is from an American character's point of view, and my American beta asked what a "duvet" was! Cue me discovering the word "comforter" for the first time. :) Another common giveaway as it were is the "go <verb>" construct which is generally not used in British English (we tend to say "go and <verb>", so it would be "go and get" rather than "go get". Just another random tip you didn't ask for. Having written for American fandoms as a British writer, I've given all this way more thought than necessary. :D ).
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Date: 2012-12-04 04:29 pm (UTC)To be fair, the comforter jumped out particularly because I had the reverse problem in my current Sherlock-House crossover, which is from an American character's point of view, and my American beta asked what a "duvet" was! Cue me discovering the word "comforter" for the first time. :) Another common giveaway as it were is the "go <verb>" construct which is generally not used in British English (we tend to say "go and <verb>", so it would be "go and get" rather than "go get". Just another random tip you didn't ask for. Having written for American fandoms as a British writer, I've given all this way more thought than necessary. :D ).