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DVD Extras
May. 2nd, 2015 11:52 pmDue to my excess wordiness of late, I've had to do quite a bit of trimming down of stories, and I've ended up with superfluous scenes. I thought I'd do a little 'DVD Bonus' post of three of them, rather than just left them sitting around.
They were never edited fully, so there might be some grammar and wording mistakes.
The first one was going to be at the end of 'Memory Lapse', but I cut it due to length and it not saying anything I needed to say.
( Scene One: From 'Memory Lapse' )
This one comes from 'A Good Thing'. I wanted Anna and Peggy to have a conversation instead of just telling through narration that they were getting along, but the story was too long, and Jarvis and Peggy took the conversation over, so I ended up trimming it down to the end of the dialogue to give a sense of them conversing without it taking up too much room.
( Scene Two: From 'A Good Thing' )
This last one is from my original attempt to write 'A Good Thing', which was going to be from Howard's POV. It was going along all right, but after this scene Howard got very self-centred and concerned about his business, and I couldn't get him back to where I wanted the story to go, so I switched it over to Jarvis' POV instead, and transferred some of the stuff from Howard's part to him. Therefore, there are few similar lines in it to the finished story.
( Scene Three: Alternative version of A Good Thing )
They were never edited fully, so there might be some grammar and wording mistakes.
The first one was going to be at the end of 'Memory Lapse', but I cut it due to length and it not saying anything I needed to say.
( Scene One: From 'Memory Lapse' )
This one comes from 'A Good Thing'. I wanted Anna and Peggy to have a conversation instead of just telling through narration that they were getting along, but the story was too long, and Jarvis and Peggy took the conversation over, so I ended up trimming it down to the end of the dialogue to give a sense of them conversing without it taking up too much room.
( Scene Two: From 'A Good Thing' )
This last one is from my original attempt to write 'A Good Thing', which was going to be from Howard's POV. It was going along all right, but after this scene Howard got very self-centred and concerned about his business, and I couldn't get him back to where I wanted the story to go, so I switched it over to Jarvis' POV instead, and transferred some of the stuff from Howard's part to him. Therefore, there are few similar lines in it to the finished story.
( Scene Three: Alternative version of A Good Thing )
