Date: 2015-01-16 01:12 am (UTC)
Oh my heart! This lovely, lovely fic! I want to hug it tight and cuddle it.

I really like the way you used the interactions between daemons to show the relationships between their humans; particularly when Dejeni and Demira start working on the robot together. Poor Tony and Howard nearly had a father-son moment before SHIELD business.

Howard was very Howard in his panic about Tony going missing and then how he dealt with it afterward. He loves him so much but can't channel much of that into expressing it in a way that Tony can see. His pep talk to Tony, while true just fuels the idea that Tony will always, in a sense, be alone. I mean, nice try Howard but yeesh.

I like the relationship you gave Jarvis and Tony. Between Jarvis and Howard, it's really to Jarvis that Tony would feel bad about worrying which was incredibly sweet.

All the nods to what we're learning and seeing in Agent Carter was also great.

Wonderful story!
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