Date: 2015-02-16 11:09 pm (UTC)
Thanks for the pictures of the daemons at the top, they’re a great reference. The picture of Subira in particular is so cute. I love how they’re just subtly there coloring every scene and interaction, a true part of the world.

John let out a low whistle. “You're like a drug dealer for crap food,” he said.

Hahaha, this is a great line.

I never thought about how daemons might affect sports playing, so that in particular was interesting!

Great story! I wonder if Sherlock and Tzo are going to think of something useful for John to do in the hospital. :)
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