I'm very late to commenting on this fic. I read it around when you first posted it but I finally have a few minutes to re-read it (yessss!!) and comment!
For some reason I kind of chuckled at how super-serious Bucky was about JJ never having to ask about if it would be okay to come over. Maybe I just saw it really clearly in my head. Also, the idea of Bucky channeling his Winter Soldier self to scare the crap out of some kids is also kind of funny in a "haha, but no, don't actually do it" kind of way.
This was a sweet fic. The tradition of a Barnes cleaning up a Rogers still goes on.
I've been kind of tinkering around with a fic between JJ and Elliot. I keep wondering if I'm writing JJ properly and it's basically me asking myself, "Is he being polite? Is he being too polite? If the answer is yes, then it's probably right."
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Date: 2016-05-05 12:12 am (UTC)For some reason I kind of chuckled at how super-serious Bucky was about JJ never having to ask about if it would be okay to come over. Maybe I just saw it really clearly in my head. Also, the idea of Bucky channeling his Winter Soldier self to scare the crap out of some kids is also kind of funny in a "haha, but no, don't actually do it" kind of way.
This was a sweet fic. The tradition of a Barnes cleaning up a Rogers still goes on.
I've been kind of tinkering around with a fic between JJ and Elliot. I keep wondering if I'm writing JJ properly and it's basically me asking myself, "Is he being polite? Is he being too polite? If the answer is yes, then it's probably right."