Well, you sucked me in with the Iron Man fic, and now I'm reading it all. :) And this is really good -- you've totally captured Harry and Murphy's dialogue ("I don’t do it for the thrills," I said. "I do it because I’m an idiot." is totally one of my favorite Harry lines ever), and the set-up of using pizza to guilt and bribe the fairies is outstanding. (I love the little voice in back going "Oh no!" at the thought of no more pizza ever.)
Because I love this and want it to be even more awesome, I have two nitpicks I'd like to contribute (one as a Chicago resident), if you're interested. If not, this is still funny as all hell. :)
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Date: 2008-07-30 05:19 pm (UTC)Because I love this and want it to be even more awesome, I have two nitpicks I'd like to contribute (one as a Chicago resident), if you're interested. If not, this is still funny as all hell. :)