I'm always happy to be sucked in by good fic, no worries. :D
Oh, good. :) The Chicago nitpick is that we call it the Art Institute of Chicago (actually, it's usually just the Art Institute, but I get that tacking on the "of Chicago" might help readers). We never add Museum; it sounds really bizarre to me. < shrug >
Other nitpick: I couldn’t her tongue sticking out at me, but was sure it was.
You're missing a word in there; I think it's 'see'
Otherwise, this just rocks. :)
ETA: Don't worry about the Chicago knowledge thing; this is a way smaller and more insignificant boo-boo than several Jim Butcher himself has made. (There are no Wal-Marts in Chicago, Wrigley Field doesn't have a parking lot, and I don't care if you are riding a T Rex on the LSD, you can't get from Museum Campus to Evanston that fast!)
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Date: 2008-07-30 08:23 pm (UTC)Oh, good. :) The Chicago nitpick is that we call it the Art Institute of Chicago (actually, it's usually just the Art Institute, but I get that tacking on the "of Chicago" might help readers). We never add Museum; it sounds really bizarre to me. < shrug >
Other nitpick: I couldn’t her tongue sticking out at me, but was sure it was.
You're missing a word in there; I think it's 'see'
Otherwise, this just rocks. :)
ETA: Don't worry about the Chicago knowledge thing; this is a way smaller and more insignificant boo-boo than several Jim Butcher himself has made. (There are no Wal-Marts in Chicago, Wrigley Field doesn't have a parking lot, and I don't care if you are riding a T Rex on the LSD, you can't get from Museum Campus to Evanston that fast!)