Uncooperative Muses

[awanderingbard]

I would really like to write a story with adult Mycroft and Q interacting together, sans Sherlock. All my stories seem to have them very briefly interacting, and only once in person. I'd like to do something more.

But they won't let me.

They are too freakin' competent, it is ridiculous. I keep trying to put them in dangerous situations or a dramatic setting, and they just sort of deal with it in the first two paragraphs and move along. Without Sherlock there to be a source of drama to work around, they just grit their teeth and do what they need to and carry on.

I think it's because both Mycroft and Q are quiet. They make a point of not drawing attention to themselves, and deal with things without being noticed. So, where Sherlock instantly wants the attention and makes a noise and throws a spanner in the works, Mycroft and Q just get on with things, and even if they don't get along, put that aside and carry on. Which is great for them, but absolutely rubbish for a story. They are boring together, and I can't even manufacture drama.

Dammit, functional relationships!

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[joonscribble.livejournal.com]

Dude is a robot, that's why he's good.

He's good for the screen but not so much for my writing sanity.

It comes down to the fact that Mycroft is very politely going 'can you escape?' and Sherlock is 'why haven't you escaped?!'.

I imagine Mycroft actually discussing a plan while Sherlock just does. Kind of like how when he and John were handcuffed together and John finally pointed out they had to coordinate.

I actually did also manage to hack out a quite long Christmas With the Holmes Family fic that needs some smoothing out.

Is this them as children or adults? I have one going where Q is still quite little that I'm having trouble ending.

[awanderingbard.livejournal.com]

I imagine Mycroft actually discussing a plan while Sherlock just does. Kind of like how when he and John were handcuffed together and John finally pointed out they had to coordinate.

Yes, and that is exactly why it's so boring. They were even discussing why it might be prudent to wait for help, which is not good action at all. I even had trouble convincing them it was better to try and escape. Whereas Sherlock is already out the door and trying to get himself killed.

Is this them as children or adults? I have one going where Q is still quite little that I'm having trouble ending.

Adults. Set during the Hiatus, with Sherlock having sneak in to get there.

I hate ending stories. The best advise I've heard is cut off your last paragraph and see where it leaves you. You might have already ended and not realized it. Or see if you can echo something from earlier in the story to bring it full circle. That's helped me sometimes.

[joonscribble.livejournal.com]

Hm, okay I'll try that. It's mainly from Q's POV as a small child so he's sort of endlessly thinking or prattling on about various things. Plus it's angsty and I'm trying to find fluffy things to pepper in the story so it concludes on a not depressing note.

[awanderingbard.livejournal.com]

Is this the angsty story, or have you devised yet another one? :p

It sounds very cute, at least! I love writing them as children, because it's before all the crap happened and they get along much better. Which is sort of sad, actually. But a nice change.

[joonscribble.livejournal.com]

Is this the angsty story, or have you devised yet another one? :p

This is the only kid!fic angsty story I have. The other one I'm writing with them as adults is also angsty because that's apparently all I can write.

I love writing them as children, because it's before all the crap happened and they get along much better.

You also write their family unit itself as being so happy which I love. My Christmas fic goes off a throwaway comment from Gatiss which sort of breaks that but I kind of don't want to do it. I want Mr. and Mrs. Holmes to be happy forever.

[awanderingbard.livejournal.com]

You also write their family unit itself as being so happy which I love.

Yes, that's apparently all I can write. :p

y Christmas fic goes off a throwaway comment from Gatiss which sort of breaks that but I kind of don't want to do it. I want Mr. and Mrs. Holmes to be happy forever.

I remembered that in a sudden jolt the other night. It's not strictly canon, though, and I think Gatiss said they're never going to go into detail about Sherlock and Mycroft because they felt it would be deviating too far from canon.

It's an AU, after all. I can do what I want, and so can you!