A favour...

[awanderingbard]

Is there anyone out there who would be willing to read over/beta a Lie to Me oneshot? It's my first go at the fandom and Ama, my usual read over girl, isn't familiar enough with the show. I just want to make sure the characters sound right and such. It's about 1500 words, and is sort of a conversation between Cal and Emily (his daughter).

Comments

[joyfulfeather.livejournal.com]

I would happily offer but I'm not sure I'll have much time over the next few days, since I have company in town. But I'll try!

[awanderingbard.livejournal.com]

I actually mostly just need someone to read it and tell me whether Cal sounds like Cal and Emily sounds like Emily. So you wouldn't have to worry so much about the grammar or whatever, if that makes it easier on you. And there's no rush. :-)

[joyfulfeather.livejournal.com]

Okay, then sure! :D